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for Devils Bride

by Ashahebsed

person Ryu
schedule September 11, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was... unexpected. Not bad to say the least. Would be interesting to know what follows. Care to write more?
person Anja
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Sehr Gut.!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person whitesepulchre
schedule October 21, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Ich liebe dein Geschichte! Ich verstehe nur Haelfte. Ich studiere Deutsch fuer mein Hauptfach.

Yea, I know, my German probably wasn\'t perfect. I do love your story though, even if I couldn\'t understand all of it. I got enough of it.
person Carmecilla
schedule July 19, 2003 at 12:00 AM
In German and English too:

1) ich bin zwar kein fan von S&M aber wenn du die gossensprache ein bißchen zurück schraubst wär der unterschiet zwischen den romance novel ausdrücken und der umgangssprache nicht mehr ganz so störend.

2) I am no friends of S/M but read it anyway, If you would lose a few of the slang terms it would fit better to the terms of the romance novel lines you used.

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