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October 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi,
i´am from southamerica (we speek more spanish here, but i didn´t think you would understand it...) and i was for an year in germany and so i can read and understand a whole bit of what you´ve write. a friend of mine gimme that fic, cause she would know about what you exactly write. now i read the fic and burst out in lough. i love weis kreuz and i like omi and ken as pair too, but i don´t like ooc. the characters are so outa their personalities... god! sorry, i wont annoy you, but aya are so worried for examples. your fic is more like an teenie-movie not like a weis kreuz fiction. but don´t think bad about your fic! nobody is good when he begins ;) keep on writing and working until you know how to realise a really god fic. kein meister fallen vom himmel, right?
sm pui
i´am from southamerica (we speek more spanish here, but i didn´t think you would understand it...) and i was for an year in germany and so i can read and understand a whole bit of what you´ve write. a friend of mine gimme that fic, cause she would know about what you exactly write. now i read the fic and burst out in lough. i love weis kreuz and i like omi and ken as pair too, but i don´t like ooc. the characters are so outa their personalities... god! sorry, i wont annoy you, but aya are so worried for examples. your fic is more like an teenie-movie not like a weis kreuz fiction. but don´t think bad about your fic! nobody is good when he begins ;) keep on writing and working until you know how to realise a really god fic. kein meister fallen vom himmel, right?
sm pui